Comments on: In Front of the Fireplace: Babeland Swag Contest Finalist #3 (Take 2)

By: Sxxxxx

Sxxxxx — Thu, 25 Sep 2008 21:19:48 +0000

Apparently the Obama campaign took advantage of your very reasonable advertising rates.

Funny…. -aag

By: Beautiful Dreamer

Beautiful Dreamer — Thu, 25 Sep 2008 02:49:55 +0000

I just wanted to leave a comment. Is it me, or does it seem as if the voting is out of control? I know AAG is popular, but damn! Is there any safeguards so people can’t vote more than once?

At the moment there are fewer than 500 votes. I don’t see this as “out of control” in the least, as compared to traffic and votes placed on other polls I’ve put up. The voting widget is set to accept one vote per person. –aag

By: Madelyn

Madelyn — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 23:44:02 +0000

Meh. Not the worst, but didn’t do much for me I’m afraid.

By: Erika

Erika — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 22:57:08 +0000

Loved this story, especially the closing line :)

By: Randi

Randi — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 22:48:12 +0000

This is the thing with stories – writers can easily get upset about their work and can become defensive. I commend all the writers for submitting their story to AAG no matter whether you were chosen or not. Those who were chosen as the top five, please don’t take the criticism harshly and just be happy that you were chosen! A lot of us weren’t.

By: yep

yep — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 22:28:48 +0000

For the record, this story was written in half an hour’s time under severe duress; Brian, I’d like to see you do better with that time limit. Yes, her mound. Read erotica more often, it’s a common phrase and one that elicits the proper visual.

This is by no means my best work, but is far from my worst as well. It’s just a story. I agree with Lolli that I should have pulled the temperature thing in, but was beginning to run low on available words and wouldn’t have done justice to the joys of temp play.

Thanks for whatever votes are given, and I hope to be able to entertain you again sometime.

By: Lolli

Lolli — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 22:14:32 +0000

This is a pretty good story, not quite enough for me to change my vote though.

Just one thing for the author (and this is a personal thing), you missed a real trick with the temperature thing… there’s nothing like cold toys be they glass or metal ;)

Oh, and btw, that’s not me up there ^^^ I don’t have an e.

By: Lollie

Lollie — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 20:14:44 +0000

Lovely, very very lovely. I hope you stop by and critique my post today. Happy Wednesday!–Lollie

By: Rxxx Rxxx

Rxxx Rxxx — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 15:59:37 +0000

Thanks for this really teasing post! I now have to use my wand too! :P Anyways, I would like to also invite you to check out XXXXXXX.com you might find it interesting and useful.

(Contact information / link removed by admin.) Oh for fuck’s sake. My advertising rates are very reasonable. Email and ask. And be glad I didn’t mark this as spam. *grumbling* –aag

By: Randi

Randi — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 13:06:02 +0000

Eh – not my favorite, but then I’m pretty picky :)