At long last, here is the final story for the Babeland Swag Contest.
Voting is in the sidebar; it’ll be open through Saturday, September 27th at 12:01 am (this site’s third birthday). I’ll announce the winning entry then.
Thank you to everyone who has participated in this contest. Thank you Babeland for letting us participate in this way for their 15th anniversary!–aag
In Front of the Fireplace
She told me time and again that she would never play with a glass toy; she said she was too afraid. I resigned myself to leaving them on the fireplace mantel as sculptures for the foreseeable future and turned my thoughts to the less decorative and more mundane toys she kept in her bedside drawers… until, that is, I set eyes on the Pure Wand.
The fire was blazing on the chilly afternoon it arrived. She was sleeping, having come home from work a mere three hours prior. I thanked my luck and immediately set my plans in motion, spreading our favorite blanket on the floor by the fireplace and tucking the lovely display box under a pillow in the corner.
When she arose groggy and beautiful to the smells of manicotti cooking and fresh ground coffee brewing that evening, I offered her a mug of the strong Kona blend at the foot of the stairs. Instead of allowing her to access the kitchen, however, I directed her into the living room. She grinned sleepily when she saw the blanket and the fire, and happily deposited herself on the soft microfiber after shedding her pajamas. I grinned a little deviously and encouraged her to finish her coffee while I removed my clothes as well.
I kissed her gently at first, then more insistently as our hands roamed over each others’ bodies, finding the places we knew would elicit gasps and moans. I broke the contact just long enough to reach under the forgotten pillow and retrieve the box that contained the marvel of art and steel. Handing the box to her, I sat back on my heels and watched her face in the firelight. As she opened the lid, her eyes widened in shock and she turned to me with a thousand questions on her lips. I smiled, lifted the box from her hands, and pulled the Pure Wand from its silk housing. The possibilities were endless!
The steel glinted beautifully in the firelight as I traced her curves with the Wand, using my hands and her skin to warm the metal. When its temperature was just right, I made lazy circles on her belly with it, moving lower with every pass until an agonizingly long minute later the large tip was resting on her mound. I pressed down lightly for a moment, then slid the end along her pussy lips and eased it into her. She gasped and arched her back at the unfamiliar sensation of unforgiving steel, but didn’t complain; rather, after a moment she reached down and grasped my wrist to encourage more of the toy inside her. I was only too happy to oblige, and carefully worked the Wand to put pressure on her g-spot. It was so easy to provide the pressure she has always wanted and needed for a spectacular g-spot climax that I was amazed and aroused to find her coming hard within minutes, and learned that metal made my girlfriend a squirter.
The nJoy Pure Wand is the most beautiful of toys, and an absolute delight for a couple with a spent man to play with. As AAG well knows!
“her mound”, really? That’s terrible.
You know, I actually found this one to be the most exciting for me. I want a pure wand, lol.
Eh – not my favorite, but then I’m pretty picky :)
Thanks for this really teasing post! I now have to use my wand too! :P Anyways, I would like to also invite you to check out XXXXXXX.com you might find it interesting and useful.
(Contact information / link removed by admin.) Oh for fuck’s sake. My advertising rates are very reasonable. Email and ask. And be glad I didn’t mark this as spam. *grumbling* –aag
Lovely, very very lovely. I hope you stop by and critique my post today. Happy Wednesday!–Lollie
This is a pretty good story, not quite enough for me to change my vote though.
Just one thing for the author (and this is a personal thing), you missed a real trick with the temperature thing… there’s nothing like cold toys be they glass or metal ;)
Oh, and btw, that’s not me up there ^^^ I don’t have an e.
For the record, this story was written in half an hour’s time under severe duress; Brian, I’d like to see you do better with that time limit. Yes, her mound. Read erotica more often, it’s a common phrase and one that elicits the proper visual.
This is by no means my best work, but is far from my worst as well. It’s just a story. I agree with Lolli that I should have pulled the temperature thing in, but was beginning to run low on available words and wouldn’t have done justice to the joys of temp play.
Thanks for whatever votes are given, and I hope to be able to entertain you again sometime.
This is the thing with stories – writers can easily get upset about their work and can become defensive. I commend all the writers for submitting their story to AAG no matter whether you were chosen or not. Those who were chosen as the top five, please don’t take the criticism harshly and just be happy that you were chosen! A lot of us weren’t.
Loved this story, especially the closing line :)
Meh. Not the worst, but didn’t do much for me I’m afraid.
I just wanted to leave a comment. Is it me, or does it seem as if the voting is out of control? I know AAG is popular, but damn! Is there any safeguards so people can’t vote more than once?
At the moment there are fewer than 500 votes. I don’t see this as “out of control” in the least, as compared to traffic and votes placed on other polls I’ve put up. The voting widget is set to accept one vote per person. –aag
Apparently the Obama campaign took advantage of your very reasonable advertising rates.
Funny…. -aag