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22nd Sep, 2008

An Appetizer Before Dinner: Babeland Swag Contest Finalist #4

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Here’s our fourth finalist’s story for the Babeland Swag Contest. One final entry will post tomorrow, then voting opens.

Read, enjoy, and please leave some comments. Stay tuned for the final entry tomorrow! –aag

An Appetizer Before Dinner

What my girlfriend knows is that she’s having appetizers in a five-star restaurant. What she doesn’t know is that I’ve smuggled in the Delight vibrator secretly. So when she finishes eating I walk over to rub her shoulders and whisper, “I have something for you.”

I take her by the hand and lead her away from the table while she wonders what’s in store. We go towards the womens room and, after a quick glance to see who’s watching, we slip inside.

The poor, curious girl, nervous but excited, seems to be catching on as I dominantly but gently push her into the furthest stall, lock it, and begin to strip her. I set my barely-dressed beauty down on the seat and, meeting her surprised eyes, pull out the toy.

I turn it on and start to caress her body, starting with her nipples. A light sigh escapes her lips when I lick her thigh and move inward, my tongue and the toy in succession inching towards her sweet spot, and hit - softly - at the same time. I gently lick her clit while the head of the toy lightly and barely enters her, preparing her for the ride slowly and intensely.

Then somebody enters the bathroom.

I could give my girl a break and let her catch her breath until the stranger leaves, but I’m having too much fun for that. Without warning, I shove it all the way in. She wants to cry out in excitement, but is afraid of being heard, so despite the surprise and intense stimulation, she grits her teeth and holds her breath. I slide the toy in and out, fucking her at an ever-increasing pace. My tongue hasn’t stopped either, now instead of gently lapping her clit, sucking it.

Her eyes grow wider and she tilts her head back, trying to contain the desire to moan loudly and cum. She wraps her legs tightly around me and her heels dig into my back while her hands brace against the sides of the stall. She breathes heavily but tries like hell to maintain silence. She’s only encouraging me, and I reach up with my free hand to rub her breasts. She grabs my hair and pulls it hard and her hips begin to buck against the vibrator. She’s now fucking my toy and my tongue even more than I’m fucking her. Still, our unsuspecting visitor remains, forcing her silence.

She’s gone from heavy breathing to grunting, now hardly able to contain herself. She braces her heels hard against the door, and then, just above the rough, animalistic sounds of her impatience, we hear the bathroom door close. And my girlfriend bursts in an intense, lasting orgasm.

As she catches her breath, I pull the toy away and let her relax. I get a towel and help her wipe off the sweat. I gently kiss her on the neck and shoulders to bring her down softly.

Hopefully our meal is ready by now.

Posted by: aag

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Responses

So I take it there will only be four finalists? I can’t wait to read the fourth! Should make for an interesting vote, they’re all very good!

By: Beautiful Dreamer on September 22nd, 2008
at 12:08 am

I’m really liking this one. There’s just something about it that has jumped out at me. Perhaps it’s the need to keep quiet (I am vocal), or the public setting or the selflessness of him in just wanting to bring her pleasure. Maybe it’s all three. Whatever it is, I like it.

By: Lucy on September 22nd, 2008
at 12:59 am

this one is my favorite so far. strap-ons are always a buzzkill for me in a story.

By: vladriana on September 22nd, 2008
at 1:22 am

The sex was hot, very hot. But just thinking of public toilet germs so close to someones mouth… ick.

By: Nyk on September 22nd, 2008
at 4:30 am

True on the public toilets. EW. but ya know what would make them less icky? I super-fancy restaurant….

:-)

By: angela on September 22nd, 2008
at 9:49 am

YES! Best one so far.

By: S on September 22nd, 2008
at 11:56 am

Oh my!

By: Sticky on September 22nd, 2008
at 1:29 pm

So hot! I have to agree, my favorite one yet.

By: ImplodingBellybutton on September 22nd, 2008
at 1:56 pm

I’m thinking so far the first one was my favorite…but then again, we’ll see which one comes up tomorrow!

By: Randi on September 22nd, 2008
at 2:16 pm

By far the most erotically exquisite literature I’ve ever read. Contest == over!

By: Ryan on September 22nd, 2008
at 4:55 pm

This is probably the best of those published so far but am I seriously expected to believe that I’m the only one who is feeling a bit disappointed at just how poor the overall quality of the stories is given the amazing swag on offer in return?

I can’t help wondering how bad the rest were if these are the pick of the bunch and I am not convinced that any of them deserves such a reward.

And before anyone rips in to me and says ‘if you can do better why didn’t you?’ the simple answer is that my location disqualified me from entering.

By: Lolli on September 22nd, 2008
at 5:43 pm

So far, this is a close second to #1. Like it!

By: twizted on September 22nd, 2008
at 7:11 pm

Mmm, this is my favorite so far! Very hot story - the chemistry is palpable!

By: Thursday's Child on September 22nd, 2008
at 10:59 pm

I didn’t read the rules very closely so there may have been a guideline but….I’m wondering why no one is fucking a *man* with a strap on in any of the stories? It’s such a rush to see it disappear in to his ass while he grinds down on it. My vote? Some ass fuckin’ happening.

By: (the other) Dee on September 22nd, 2008
at 11:46 pm

This is my favorite I think. I love the power dynamic at play here. I sent this to Daddy last night– it reminds me of him :)

Lolli, I really enjoyed these stories. I’m guessing that none of the entrants are professional erotic writers– everyone wrote what was hot to them and hoped for the best! That’s what I did. Daddy loved my story (not selected so far) and that’s all that matters.

By: Daddy's Lucy on September 23rd, 2008
at 8:47 am

This one is my favorite by far! Hot hot hot public action. Have to love a guy who thinks ahead and has some adventure in him.

By: Jackie on September 23rd, 2008
at 11:00 am

This is my fave out of the four here for definite!!!

By: Hannah on September 23rd, 2008
at 6:48 pm

This one gets my vote.

By: Madelyn on September 24th, 2008
at 8:54 pm

This is the one my boyfriend and I wrote, and I’m so psyched, because it’s totally the only way broke-ass college students like us will get exciting toys like this. Also, for what it’s worth, I promised him that if we won, we could play out the fantasy… ;-)

By: Madeline on September 24th, 2008
at 10:40 pm

Why does the story need to be placed in a fancy restaurant? It’s superfluous.

How does this voting thing work anyway? What if someone just goes to different terminals at their school to vote more than once?

As with nearly everything on the web, there are ways to get around the limitations placed on this poll. I’d prefer very much if we all played nicely. If I find out folks haven’t played nicely, I will dq them. –aag

By: Libby on September 25th, 2008
at 6:38 pm

Is the above comment a thinly-veiled suggestion that I’m going to cheat just because I said I’m a college student? And why SHOULDN’T it be in a fancy restaurant? I don’t get it…but it makes me kind of sad.

By: Madeline on September 25th, 2008
at 9:41 pm

In general, I’ve found that ignoring snarky comments works the best.

:)

By: aag on September 25th, 2008
at 10:13 pm

I’m waiting for part 2, where our erotic adventurers exit the stall to find that the slam of the door wasn’t the first person leaving, but a second person entering. ;)

By: Beau on September 29th, 2008
at 6:44 pm