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I’m removing the third finalist’s story for the Babeland Swag Contest, unless and until I hear from the author.
Never you fear, though. Two more entries are set to arrive over the next two days, then I’ll open up voting.
Enjoy!
I’m sorry. I’m just not feeling the strap ons.
The first one was wonderful and I enjoyed the male/female interactino in it, the second was OK, but, honestly, I quit reading this one as soon as I realized it was another strap on story.
The first few paragraphs and the flirting in French are interesting, but I really would enjoy reading about different toys.
By: 
PezWitch on September 21st, 2008
at 12:56 am
Note to self: Write more stories about strap-ons.
By: 
kelly on September 21st, 2008
at 2:19 am
Hm. Call me a language snob but I would have enjoyed that much more if it had been grammatically correct. You’re very unlikely to use the formal “vous” format if you’re having sex with someone unless it’s some kind of D/s scene. It would have been “pour toi”. When she said she knew very little French, she wasn’t kidding.
By: 
A on September 21st, 2008
at 7:39 am
The writing was great, and the sex was hot! Still, I was transported back to high school french class. Also, now I have Flight of the Conchords’ song ‘Foux De Fa Fa’ stuck in my head. Of course, I’ve always been a bit weird…
By: 
ImplodingBellybutton on September 21st, 2008
at 10:30 am
I recognize this from the EdenFantasys website. It’s the newest fantasy on the front page.
By: 
ABoy on September 21st, 2008
at 11:23 am
Well I liked it! Anything with hot slippery sex in it wins me over =D
This story and the 1st one are my current Favs.
By: 
Matt on September 21st, 2008
at 12:31 pm
I’m afraid I had the same reaction to ‘vous’ instead of ‘toi’, but the idea of using language as foreplay is certainly enticing.
And Bellybutton — Ha! I love that song.
By: 
marianne on September 21st, 2008
at 1:58 pm
Hm, interesting. Thank you, ABoy.
I’m disqualifying this one, at least until and unless I hear back from the author.
–aag
By: 
aag on September 21st, 2008
at 3:38 pm
So if this one gets thrown out are you going to choose a sixth one to make the final tally five or will the competition be between the four?
By: 
Sunbunny on September 21st, 2008
at 6:50 pm
:)
I’ve not yet decided.
By: aag on September 21st, 2008
at 7:47 pm
Uh oh - copying is bad - bad bad bad…hope there was no copying going on!!
By: 
Randi on September 21st, 2008
at 8:35 pm
