21st Sep, 2008

Pour Vous: Babeland Swag Contest Finalist #3

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I’m removing the third finalist’s story for the Babeland Swag Contest, unless and until I hear from the author.

Never you fear, though. Two more entries are set to arrive over the next two days, then I’ll open up voting.

Enjoy!

Responses

I’m sorry. I’m just not feeling the strap ons.

The first one was wonderful and I enjoyed the male/female interactino in it, the second was OK, but, honestly, I quit reading this one as soon as I realized it was another strap on story.

The first few paragraphs and the flirting in French are interesting, but I really would enjoy reading about different toys.

Note to self: Write more stories about strap-ons.

Hm. Call me a language snob but I would have enjoyed that much more if it had been grammatically correct. You’re very unlikely to use the formal “vous” format if you’re having sex with someone unless it’s some kind of D/s scene. It would have been “pour toi”. When she said she knew very little French, she wasn’t kidding.

The writing was great, and the sex was hot! Still, I was transported back to high school french class. Also, now I have Flight of the Conchords’ song ‘Foux De Fa Fa’ stuck in my head. Of course, I’ve always been a bit weird…

I recognize this from the EdenFantasys website. It’s the newest fantasy on the front page.

Well I liked it! Anything with hot slippery sex in it wins me over =D

This story and the 1st one are my current Favs.

I’m afraid I had the same reaction to ‘vous’ instead of ‘toi’, but the idea of using language as foreplay is certainly enticing.

And Bellybutton — Ha! I love that song.

Hm, interesting. Thank you, ABoy.

I’m disqualifying this one, at least until and unless I hear back from the author.

–aag

So if this one gets thrown out are you going to choose a sixth one to make the final tally five or will the competition be between the four?

:)

I’ve not yet decided.

Uh oh - copying is bad - bad bad bad…hope there was no copying going on!!

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